Mami-ish doodle, second try

Two days and a few tutorials later, I decided to redraw the same profile. It took me a lot less time and less erasing.
I might draw it again in a few days, who knows. Anyway, it was high time I started to do something about my profiles...and that I stopped trying to find out the stuff by myself instead of learning from those who already know xD

Any comments? Like, anything that isn't proportionate, or if that profile doesn't feel consistent with the rest of my style yet ? I'll be reading the comments, if anyone leaves any